sensarchux's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Queens Bite]

Superb Job!

- The animation is superb, outstanding job with the graphics most likely took a while to get it that good.

- The background music and sounds used was a good choice for your animation.
- Excellent Timing as well with the sound FX!

- There is not much story to it, guy in wig brings food to feed the Queen, falls off balcony, and gets eaten.

Conclusion:
I'm only assuming you did not brain storm this through, or did not have a script. This most definetly could have been put up on the front page over a 4.50+ if you only have thought of something more to add to the story. Though it probably would require a title change then. But I guess you decided it was enough and decided to upload, which is fine!
Add: The bulk of an animation is a good story IMO not graphics.

Superb Job Non-the less!

The-Evil-Bunny responds:

Thx a lot for the kind respond, you couldn't have nailed it more than you did right there (:
I worked a lot on my style but lost sight on a good story. I'm at he end of my first year of animation, next year I'll make a better one (: hope to nail the front page when i do (:

Have a good one. Ken

[5 short loops Theatre]

Enjoyable

The first one I clicked was the hippy mobile in the background but there was no way to return to see the other 4 so I had to refresh. After watching another short clip I see a return button on the screen. At the end I decided to check the hippy mobile in the background and there still was no return button.

Other than that its a quite enjoyable flash with fun loops to click on.

HolyKonni responds:

hi and thanks! actually there is a moose in the left corner. it's just VERY transparent, that's all.

[Give out your heart...]

well done!

I saw a few errors with your layers most likely accidental, I liked your animation. it was hard to tell what gender each were or I'm still unsure if there were even two characters In this animation. At one point it looks like there holding hands with the flower in the middle with the sunset (very nice mood setting) well that's just it the sleeves it was hard to tell if they actually were holding hands cause there are none!

Also a nice music choice very nicely done!

Jamieneo66 responds:

Ah it is a guy and a girl :3
but i suppose your right there, i'll have to make the corrections in the edit, and sorry this took so long to get back to XD

[Bloody Bye]

Meh XD

The animation was well done, I see talent In your drawings. It was short but I must say my life was not wasted this was worth clicking on and watching.

Voices could have used a little work, the Russian language...well nice job with the sub-titles. =P

Overall - Worth watching will share with my friends!

Artyluck responds:

Talent? Nah, just practice. I'm glad that wasn't waste of your life time. xD

[Kaiblade Episode 2]

Outstanding!

First off the voice actor jai In this animated 'series' is by-far the best iv heard on new-grounds yet. It's so good its definitely at a professional anime voice actors level.
Well that's all I really had to say the other things I would want to say is stuff you already know!
the characters drawings could use a bit more work, could have found better sound effects. etc.

Cant wait for episode 3 hope its longer! XD

-SSX

CartoonCoffee responds:

Yeah, I found a talented bunch of voice actors. they really bring life to this series

[Bunnykill 4]

Amazing

Wow that was really good you deserve those awards :D! - Bunny kills are FTW!
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^(^.^)> (fail bunny drawing attempt) - :D
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Mottis responds:

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How 'bout this? A fat bunny xD

[Madness Mercenary]

Nice

It was an okay attempt with the stick like figure the animation needed some work though. It was sort of short also.

but seeing as its your very first flash animation you already surpass others.
Gratz it was nice I enjoy'd it hope to see more in the future.

GameChild214 responds:

thank you, also can you tell me how in just 2 hours this has 215 votes and 267 views, or do most sumbissions always say that. Also this wouldve been crapy but, I actually watched alot of other peoples madness's both krinkles and other peoples. So I thought of what I should do, and I decided to make something like that and this is what I came up with. I usually try to find alot of advise THEN make my video. also I knew it was short I added up all the seconds, I wanted to make it longer but I realy wanted to post more on newgrounds for people can know Im not cheep, and I also wanted to show people what kind of naturaul skills I have.